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An Introduction to BFF

  • Nov. 28th, 2006 at 10:00 AM
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Welcome to my new story, Best Friends Forever.  When I told my RL reader/friend about the acronym, he immediately said, "Hey! That could stand for Boy's Fanny Fun!" Hmmm...... what would we do without our friends?!

Anyway, I just wanted to give you a brief overview of the new story, to help you decide if you want to tag along for the ride on this one. It's going to be quite a bit different from BIL and BBR, although the end result will be the same: I only write love stories, and I only do happy endings. The journey will be where we mix it up!

First off, this is going to be my virgin attempt at a Jack and Ennis story. I will make every effort to stay true to the essence of our boys. However, please remember, this is a totally different story set in modern day, so don't be surprised if you notice a bit of tweaking. What Ennis is up for in this story, he probably wouldn't have gone for in BBM. But in this story he has a different life: more education, more money, more confidence. He's still the same quiet, intense, horse-lovin' country boy, though, and he still falls head over heels for Jack's pretty blue eyes, sweet, kissable mouth and loveable personality.
 
The next major difference you might notice will be the style. BFF will alternate between the two boys' POVs, and the narrator's POV. I will try to keep everything dreadfully clear, but if I get lax, please let me know. Also, the boys speak in a type of small town, country boy slang. This will carry over into the general narrative as well most of the time. Nothing too complicated or strange, but I'm going to try to write like we Southern folks talk. I hope this will make it easier for you to hear them when they talk. 

The boys are younger in this story, seventeen, seniors in High School. I don't have kids, and it's been a long time since I was in high school myself. So, if something doesn't quite jibe with your knowledge of  high school life, let's just pretend like that's the way they do it at this school. As for some of the wild shenanigans they are going to get up to - trust me...... I either did it, wanted to do it, or knew someone who did it when I was a teenager. 

In this story, I'm going to explore some things that many might consider strange, kinky, taboo, icky weird, whatever. If I can think of it, they are going to talk about it or do it. There will be no vodoo, no black magic, no torture or abuse of any kind, and no animals will be injured in the writing of this story (unless one of the cats falls out of my lap while I'm typing!) There will be no lasting psychological tramua, but teenagers are the WORST at playing mind games with each other, so please excuse them if they venture off into that arena from time to time. Teenagers, in case you've never met one, can also be extremely rude, selfish and frustrating from time to time. My boys will not be that way, as a general rule, but they may get a little cranky on occasion. So does their author!

The only resemblence between this story and the wonderful work by Annie Proulx that we all love is the names and personalities of the main characters. It is not canon, not meant to reflect BBM in any way, alhtough you may occasionally recognize a turn of phrase, just for fun! None of the other characters will be mentioned in this story. I suppose it qualifies as AU/AU.

I am using larger type this time - it's not pretty but maybe it's easier to read, and I am going to try to do shorter, more regular updates. I know, you've all heard that before...... I did say try! We'll see how I do.

Otherwise, this is just your typical, boring romance novel. I hope you enjoy it. If you don't, please feel free to comment. However, I am going to try to be true to my idea here and stick to my guns with my story plan. So, although I definitely want and appreciate your comments and input, I hope I can stay the course with BFF. I will begin posting within the week. Here is a short excerpt to get you started. It is page one/two from chapter one. When you actually begin reading the story, you will read a short prologue before you begin chapter one. 

Thank you all, Gentle Readers. Hope to see you again soon!! S!

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Jack peeled into the parking lot Thursday morning, the first day of his senior year in high school, radio blaring. He skidded into a space and stomped on the brakes of his Mustang at the last second, bouncing to a stop just an inch from the nose of the monster four-wheel drive in the opposite spot. The guy in the truck was leaned over in the seat - Jack hadn’t even realized he was in there, but that made it even better to see the surprised look coming his way when he popped up.


Ennis......... he drove a cool truck, but otherwise he had to be one of the most boring guys in school......... seemed like people liked him ok, but Jack wasn’t sure why exactly....... he didn’t play sports, wasn’t in any clubs - maybe the rodeo club, like he could freakin’ remember for sure about that......... he didn’t date, never said much - what was there to like about a guy you’d gone to school with goin’ on four fuckin’ years and knew nothing about. Jack wasn’t sure who his friends were, or even if he had any. ‘Course, since he didn't play sports and didn't run with his crowd, he hadn’t really paid that much attention.


Jack had lots of friends, knew all the cool people and more than his fair share of the dweebs, and everybody knew him - and most of them liked him. His two best friends were Nick Peterson and Tyler Jeffreys. They did everything together...... well, they used to do everything. Last year when he’d started going out with Lizzy, he’d had to drop out of the pack, hang with her more. That had mostly sucked though, ‘cause all she’d wanted to do was watch OC and Dawson’s Creek on tv and go cruising so all her girlfriends could see her in the hot new car his parents had given him for Christmas. She’d gained eight pounds sucking down Sonic milkshakes and eatin’ cheeseburgers, then got pissed at him about it. She’d made him wait for fuckin’ ever to have sex, then it was lame...... what the fuck ever - at least he wasn’t a virgin anymore. They’d broken up over the summer - he’d let her do it, didn’t give a rat’s ass, was glad it was over. He’d started doing stuff with Nick and Tyler again the last couple of weeks, but that wasn’t as much fun anymore either.


He was determined to get it back together though. This was his last year of high school and he planned to make the most of it, not get sucked into any more bullshit relationships! That meant he probably wouldn’t be gettin’ laid much, but that was a sacrifice he was willing to make if it meant being free to do whatever the fuck he wanted to. Girls around his school were just old-fashioned enough to want to be dating a guy before they had sex, then the guy was like marked for life or something and no other girl would touch him. Since he and Lizzy had split over the summer and everybody was already cool with it, he could get a new girl friend, but then he’d be branded for the rest of the year. He’d rather just skip it, either find some girl away from school to fuck, or just keep doing what he was doing now- whacking off. It got old after a while, but it did the job. He could survive on it for one more year. Next year, when he was in college, everything would be different.


Ennis wasn’t surprised at all to see Jack Twist behind the wheel of the loud sports car that had come just a hair’s breath from bumping into his truck. Jack was the spoilt rich kid that most everybody loved most of the time, shook their head at the rest. Jack was smart and funny and one hell of an athlete, but he was also moody and high strung, seemed to be gettin’ worse every year. Ennis’d never had many classes with him, didn’t know much about him personally, but he’d overheard the teachers talkin’ about him a couple of times last year when they didn’t realize he was listening, worryin’ about Jack, like maybe he had problems at home or something. Ennis had never heard any of the other kids say anything like that, and usually they knew everything that was going on way before the adults did. Whatever... he and Jack had never been friends, probably wouldn’t get tight this year either. Jack wasn’t his problem - thank God. He had enough without addin’ Jack to the pile.


Ennis grabbed the old leather satchel that he carried his books in, jumped down from his truck and headed for class, just a few steps behind Jack. Jack was carrying a brand new backpack, whistlin’ some song Ennis had heard on his radio on the way into school, boppin’ his head to the beat. He was wearing jeans, a dark blue t-shirt and running shoes. Everything looked brand new. Ennis looked down at his clothes - same old jeans he’d been wearing forever, plain black t-shirt that was soft from washin’ but a little faded, and his cowboy boots. He had some gym clothes in his truck for later. His mom had bought him some new clothes, but he felt kinda self-conscious wearing them, like he was gettin’ all dressed up to impress people or something, which was totally not true. He was who he was, a farm boy, and they could take him or leave him - he didn’t care either way. He knew Jack Twist would leave him, and that was fine. He’d made it through three years of school without bein’ Jack’s friend, he could handle one more. And then he’d be free of this small town ‘berg with all it’s fucked up shit, and his old man with his iron fist wrapped tight around the reins a his life - Ennis couldn’t fuckin’ wait to be free.

Comments

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[info]baileymoyes wrote:
Dec. 3rd, 2006 07:29 pm (UTC)
I loved your introductions of Jake and Heath. Especially love Jake's interior monologue "four fuckin' years!" heehee. And loved his assessment of sex with Lizzy. Your wit always makes me smile. Looking forward to more of this unabashed romance. Love unabashed romance!
[info]baileymoyes wrote:
Dec. 3rd, 2006 07:42 pm (UTC)
I'm such a doof. I typed Jake and Heath when I meant Jack and Ennis.
[info]sienata wrote:
Dec. 3rd, 2006 08:22 pm (UTC)
J/H vs J/E
I'm gonna have to keep a close eye out for those names myself. Yet one more thing to keep me on my toes!! Thanks for commenting. I love you icon - that is my absolute, all-time, melt in my underpants favorite picture of Jakey!! S!
(Anonymous) wrote:
Dec. 3rd, 2006 07:35 pm (UTC)
"this is just your typical, boring romance novel" Get real Sienata, when have you ever been boring? LOL I am hooked already :-)
[info]t_wistfulheart wrote:
Dec. 3rd, 2006 07:57 pm (UTC)
Boring? hah! As if that would ever happen.
You've got me hooked, and this just wasn't anywhere near enough. More, please! Heavens, I just pictured myself going through more months of continual refreshing of this LJ page. ;)

So looking forward to this.
[info]senseofpeace wrote:
Dec. 3rd, 2006 07:59 pm (UTC)
OOh! Looks so good already...
Ok, when are we going to get the first chapter? I am so excited about your starting a new story. I must admit, the big font is smushing the words together on my screen, so I may have to cut and paste to Word so I can read this.

Anyway, I am on board for your next ride. Yippee!
[info]minchout wrote:
Dec. 3rd, 2006 08:05 pm (UTC)
I love this new idea!! After Boys of Blue Ridge you have me hooked on anything you write... I'm going to go back and read Boys in Love as soon as possible =)
[info]big_heart_june wrote:
Dec. 3rd, 2006 08:31 pm (UTC)
I'm sorry to say I've never read any of your writing :( but this has me hooked already. Your writing style is wonderful, I love it! And I'm loving this Jack and Ennis already.

Looking forward to much much more!
[info]under_wyo_skies wrote:
Dec. 4th, 2006 07:50 pm (UTC)
You need to read Boys of Blue Ridge which has just finished - it's really good. :)
[info]big_heart_june wrote:
Dec. 3rd, 2006 08:33 pm (UTC)
Oh and I forgot to say that I love your title!
[info]katetwist wrote:
Dec. 3rd, 2006 08:46 pm (UTC)
Agggghhhh - I'm hooked... Feed me!!

With just a few words you've brought Jack and Ennis to life. So we're getting more? Soon?
[info]thelastaerie wrote:
Dec. 3rd, 2006 08:48 pm (UTC)
I love the preview! Ennis's assessment of Jack rings true to the original (well, withouth the rich kid bit)... their contrast quality still shines through.

Boring? your fics is never connected with this word!

Now i have a fic to look forward to already!

Although... you might want to give folks some warnings if there's kinks/weird stuff in the chapters, readers seem to be more protective about Jack and Ennis, more than RPS.

Can't wait!

Eve
[info]sienata wrote:
Dec. 4th, 2006 09:54 am (UTC)
good idea
I'll definitely put a little something in my blurb about what sort of wild antics to prepare for in each chapter. I'm hoping (fingers crossed) that by the time things start to happen, folks will be able to accept them as believeable and reasonable, but I totally see what you mean. I don't want anyone to get majorly squicked without any warning!! Thanks for the suggestion! S!
[info]bbm_citygirl wrote:
Dec. 3rd, 2006 08:51 pm (UTC)
I can't wait!

I love your take on things and I can't wait to see Jack and Ennis explore the "fringe edges" of sexuality. Yea!

I am so sorry to see Boys of Blue Ridge end. I still owe you a comment on the last chapter. I read it last night around 2:30 in the morning and was not thinking clearly at that point.
[info]dclittledarlin wrote:
Dec. 3rd, 2006 09:53 pm (UTC)
MORE MORE MORE MORE!!!
Yay!! I love high school Jack and Ennis already so much!!! And you have not made us wait a sexond after BoBR to start BFF!!! You are a goddess!!! There is nothing better than you girlie!!! NOTHING!


[quote]this is just your typical, boring romance novel.[quote]

From you? boring? typical? never sweetie, never ever. See below quote...

[quote] In this story, I'm going to explore some things that many might consider strange, kinky, taboo, icky weird, whatever. If I can think of it, they are going to talk about it or do it.[quote]

That's my girl!!! Full on romance with lots of pervy action and talk!! I am going to be at your heels begging for more constantly!!! Bring it on!

I know firsthand that teenagers can be a handful, they are often rude, devious, sullen, and super horny!! I know you won't disappoint us... your characters are phenomenal, they are so close to real I sometimes forget it's fiction!!!

YAY!!! I am over the moon happy with your new fic!!! Can't wait for prologue and Ch 1!!!

love you W. and the kitties. and the boys.
L/K
[info]dclittledarlin wrote:
Dec. 3rd, 2006 09:55 pm (UTC)
Re: MORE MORE MORE MORE!!!
I forgot to SQUEEEEE for Toby!!! And your posting date!!! 11/28!! XXXXOOOO

love you!!!
[info]dclittledarlin wrote:
Dec. 3rd, 2006 09:59 pm (UTC)
Re: MORE MORE MORE MORE!!!
And SQUEEE for HOT!! I have fallen for this story hook, line and sinker!!!

Thank you for writing it!

L/K
[info]mel0804 wrote:
Dec. 3rd, 2006 10:17 pm (UTC)
ok, when do we get more ? ;-). I will read you new story - that's sure !
I'm loking forward to the next chapter !
[info]gamma_ray00 wrote:
Dec. 3rd, 2006 10:23 pm (UTC)
Huzzah!!! Romance with a happy ending!!! It is what you do best. Can not wait for the rest!!! I already love Jack and Ennis....it is going to be interesting to see all the twists and turns you employ to bring the boys together...!!
(Anonymous) wrote:
Dec. 3rd, 2006 11:05 pm (UTC)
Yeeeeeaaaaaahh!!!!!!!! More please!! I love it!!
[info]summor wrote:
Dec. 3rd, 2006 11:19 pm (UTC)
Yay, for a Jack and Ennis High School fic from you! Printing now! I love your big font, but I'm a printout fan, so I'll still be doing that. I can't wait to dig into all the juicy plot lines you have brewing in your head.

Back to comment soon :-).
Christina
[info]summor wrote:
Dec. 4th, 2006 06:08 am (UTC)
OHHH!! Loved every word, and can't wait for more. Very intriguing start...they both know of each other, they both want to get their senior year over and done with, and they're both hot! So many opportunities!

Loved the detail you wrote about them...I could easily picture Jack and Ennis in my mind.

Can't wait for more!
xoxo
Christina
(Anonymous) wrote:
Dec. 3rd, 2006 11:52 pm (UTC)
Looks great!! Can't wait to read more!!
[info]mondavi2000 wrote:
Dec. 4th, 2006 12:55 am (UTC)
Yay!
S,

You SO know I am coming on this ride with you....can't wait to see how you take on Jack & Ennis!! I am so excited about this!!

*Hugs*

Holly
[info]lawgoddess wrote:
Dec. 4th, 2006 01:12 am (UTC)
happy dance
Doing the hapy dance to see this. And I like the new type; it's easy to read. Looking forward to when you post in earnest. Barbara
[info]trekfan wrote:
Dec. 4th, 2006 01:36 am (UTC)
Thiis is a great start to this story. It's about time you ventured into the Ennis/Jack workd
well done!
[info]ihatemonday wrote:
Dec. 4th, 2006 01:44 am (UTC)
^_^
Yeah! A new story!
[info]arlad wrote:
Dec. 4th, 2006 02:51 am (UTC)
I seriously liked this first chapter! Hmm, Jack and Ennis sound like total opposites to each other... but they seem to have some things in common... hopefully Jack will find out that hanging out (and more!) with Ennis is just what his year and his life needs ;)
Can't wait for more!!!
Arlad
[info]sienata wrote:
Dec. 4th, 2006 02:57 am (UTC)
Just so you'll know, this wasn't the entire first chapter, just a small sample from it. And I do believe you are onto my plan already - not to give too much away, but I don't think Jack will even make it through the first day of school without getting a whole new view of Ennis!! Thanks for commenting. More in a few days. S!
[info]weepuffling wrote:
Dec. 4th, 2006 03:13 am (UTC)
i love the larger font, so much easier to read. looking forward to this story. thanks
[info]birdy27 wrote:
Dec. 4th, 2006 04:11 am (UTC)
I confess.... I am a bad, bad, bad girl. I read and loved BIL and BBR, and never got my nerve up to post any comments to you. Time to rectify that mistake.

I'm looking forward to this fic..... nothing wrong with romance and happy endings, especially where J & E are concerned. ( And I'm SO relieved at your reassurance that no animals will be injured in the writing of your story.... LOL!) Your writing has a snap, crackle and pop that I really like. Can't wait for more.
[info]sienata wrote:
Dec. 4th, 2006 08:13 pm (UTC)
Thank you!
I'm so glad you finally got up the nerve to comment - see how painless it was!! We needy authors always want to hear from our readers - our egos require constant feeding - they're like Seymour in the Little Shop of Horrors, only probably worse..... at least mine is!!! I hope you enjoy the new story. I'm hoping to start posting later this week. Happy reading!! S!
[info]bbmgirlfan wrote:
Dec. 4th, 2006 05:54 am (UTC)
Well, I'm in!

Hurry up with the next part :).

Jeanine
[info]sienata wrote:
Dec. 4th, 2006 08:15 pm (UTC)
Presssssure!
Ok, ok, give me a minute already!!! ;-) I'm working on it, I promise!!!
[info]bowie28 wrote:
Dec. 4th, 2006 07:17 am (UTC)
Very good introduction.
I know your Jack and Ennis just from these 6 paragraphs.
And I know just how hooked I'm gonna be.
They think they don't need each other NOW.
Well, we all know that these two don't know themselves THAT well until they get to really KNOW each other. ^^
[info]mistry89 wrote:
Dec. 4th, 2006 07:55 am (UTC)
I am so far from High School (son has just completed his final year and is enrolled in university for next year), that it isn't funny, but it (High School) is one of those themes that is very attractive. I'm not sure why, it could be because most of us have experienced some sort of High School scenario, and it stays with you - good or bad. It probably plugs into an assortment of "If" and "Wishes" and just plain "I remember" thoughts or something. Regardless, I adore AU's and High School just happens to occur at a very definitive stage of life.
Delighted to see the new story.
Cheers!
[info]maria47 wrote:
Dec. 4th, 2006 02:25 pm (UTC)
hooked
Typical, boring romance novel? Yeah, like the silly little love songs made by the Beatles.... I love them! So, no matter how you call your stories: Go on writing please. I was hooked on your previous stories and you have already caught me with your appetizer for the new one.
Love your style, your funny introduces to every chapter and your ideas. And no worries about your updates, your one of those who post very regularly (oooops, right spelling?, English isn't my first language and I'm sure it's a much longer time since I was in high school learning English), but well the sooner you update, the better.
maria
[info]techequeen wrote:
Dec. 4th, 2006 03:29 pm (UTC)
Well, I'm already hooked! That was great, can't wait to see where you're taking this. Donna
[info]bbmiswear wrote:
Dec. 4th, 2006 04:02 pm (UTC)
Love It!!
I loved Boys In Love, I loved Boys of Blue Ridge - is there even a chance I won't love Best Friends Forever?? And the answer is NO!! I even love the tease. Can't wait!! Thanks for this Sienata!!
[info]dajtoad wrote:
Dec. 4th, 2006 04:49 pm (UTC)
More, more, more!
Promises, promises. Don't leave us dangling there. I expect more from you instantly. If not sooner!! Love your stuff, and am looking forward to this story - looking good so far. Toad
[info]my_lil_darlin wrote:
Dec. 4th, 2006 04:50 pm (UTC)
I went to HS 40 years ago, and mostly all I remember is how much I hated everything about it. So if the guyz get kinda negative and have troubles in this story, nothing will surprise me, I'm sure of that! Meanwhile, I really look forward to seeing how you get these two hooked up. This should be intriguing, so you go, girl!
[info]coffee83 wrote:
Dec. 6th, 2006 04:13 am (UTC)
I've got to admit, I had my doubts starting reading this. I honeslty think you are the best RPS Heath and Jake author I've read, so I didn't know how to now think of you as a J&E writer.
Mostly it is because the original story is so beatiful and heartbreaking that it's hard you know, am I explaining myself?
Still I should have known you would create a world of your own that is what you did here and I have to say, I like it!
And you can tell this two are going to work out because though for two that "seem" to not care about the other at all, they sure know a lot about the other already.
I know I will love it, I know.
[info]amdaz wrote:
Dec. 7th, 2006 06:53 am (UTC)

HA!

Just the intro made me laugh.

This is really good.
Ennis seems to be a really together HS kid.
Can't wait to find out where are you taking us.
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