First off, this is going to be my virgin attempt at a Jack and Ennis story. I will make every effort to stay true to the essence of our boys. However, please remember, this is a totally different story set in modern day, so don't be surprised if you notice a bit of tweaking. What Ennis is up for in this story, he probably wouldn't have gone for in BBM. But in this story he has a different life: more education, more money, more confidence. He's still the same quiet, intense, horse-lovin' country boy, though, and he still falls head over heels for Jack's pretty blue eyes, sweet, kissable mouth and loveable personality.
The next major difference you might notice will be the style. BFF will alternate between the two boys' POVs, and the narrator's POV. I will try to keep everything dreadfully clear, but if I get lax, please let me know. Also, the boys speak in a type of small town, country boy slang. This will carry over into the general narrative as well most of the time. Nothing too complicated or strange, but I'm going to try to write like we Southern folks talk. I hope this will make it easier for you to hear them when they talk.
The boys are younger in this story, seventeen, seniors in High School. I don't have kids, and it's been a long time since I was in high school myself. So, if something doesn't quite jibe with your knowledge of high school life, let's just pretend like that's the way they do it at this school. As for some of the wild shenanigans they are going to get up to - trust me...... I either did it, wanted to do it, or knew someone who did it when I was a teenager.
In this story, I'm going to explore some things that many might consider strange, kinky, taboo, icky weird, whatever. If I can think of it, they are going to talk about it or do it. There will be no vodoo, no black magic, no torture or abuse of any kind, and no animals will be injured in the writing of this story (unless one of the cats falls out of my lap while I'm typing!) There will be no lasting psychological tramua, but teenagers are the WORST at playing mind games with each other, so please excuse them if they venture off into that arena from time to time. Teenagers, in case you've never met one, can also be extremely rude, selfish and frustrating from time to time. My boys will not be that way, as a general rule, but they may get a little cranky on occasion. So does their author!
The only resemblence between this story and the wonderful work by Annie Proulx that we all love is the names and personalities of the main characters. It is not canon, not meant to reflect BBM in any way, alhtough you may occasionally recognize a turn of phrase, just for fun! None of the other characters will be mentioned in this story. I suppose it qualifies as AU/AU.
I am using larger type this time - it's not pretty but maybe it's easier to read, and I am going to try to do shorter, more regular updates. I know, you've all heard that before...... I did say try! We'll see how I do.
Otherwise, this is just your typical, boring romance novel. I hope you enjoy it. If you don't, please feel free to comment. However, I am going to try to be true to my idea here and stick to my guns with my story plan. So, although I definitely want and appreciate your comments and input, I hope I can stay the course with BFF. I will begin posting within the week. Here is a short excerpt to get you started. It is page one/two from chapter one. When you actually begin reading the story, you will read a short prologue before you begin chapter one.
Thank you all, Gentle Readers. Hope to see you again soon!! S!
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Jack peeled into the parking lot Thursday morning, the first day of his senior year in high school, radio blaring. He skidded into a space and stomped on the brakes of his Mustang at the last second, bouncing to a stop just an inch from the nose of the monster four-wheel drive in the opposite spot. The guy in the truck was leaned over in the seat - Jack hadn’t even realized he was in there, but that made it even better to see the surprised look coming his way when he popped up.
Ennis......... he drove a cool truck, but otherwise he had to be one of the most boring guys in school......... seemed like people liked him ok, but Jack wasn’t sure why exactly....... he didn’t play sports, wasn’t in any clubs - maybe the rodeo club, like he could freakin’ remember for sure about that......... he didn’t date, never said much - what was there to like about a guy you’d gone to school with goin’ on four fuckin’ years and knew nothing about. Jack wasn’t sure who his friends were, or even if he had any. ‘Course, since he didn't play sports and didn't run with his crowd, he hadn’t really paid that much attention.
Jack had lots of friends, knew all the cool people and more than his fair share of the dweebs, and everybody knew him - and most of them liked him. His two best friends were Nick Peterson and Tyler Jeffreys. They did everything together...... well, they used to do everything. Last year when he’d started going out with Lizzy, he’d had to drop out of the pack, hang with her more. That had mostly sucked though, ‘cause all she’d wanted to do was watch OC and Dawson’s Creek on tv and go cruising so all her girlfriends could see her in the hot new car his parents had given him for Christmas. She’d gained eight pounds sucking down Sonic milkshakes and eatin’ cheeseburgers, then got pissed at him about it. She’d made him wait for fuckin’ ever to have sex, then it was lame...... what the fuck ever - at least he wasn’t a virgin anymore. They’d broken up over the summer - he’d let her do it, didn’t give a rat’s ass, was glad it was over. He’d started doing stuff with Nick and Tyler again the last couple of weeks, but that wasn’t as much fun anymore either.
He was determined to get it back together though. This was his last year of high school and he planned to make the most of it, not get sucked into any more bullshit relationships! That meant he probably wouldn’t be gettin’ laid much, but that was a sacrifice he was willing to make if it meant being free to do whatever the fuck he wanted to. Girls around his school were just old-fashioned enough to want to be dating a guy before they had sex, then the guy was like marked for life or something and no other girl would touch him. Since he and Lizzy had split over the summer and everybody was already cool with it, he could get a new girl friend, but then he’d be branded for the rest of the year. He’d rather just skip it, either find some girl away from school to fuck, or just keep doing what he was doing now- whacking off. It got old after a while, but it did the job. He could survive on it for one more year. Next year, when he was in college, everything would be different.
Ennis wasn’t surprised at all to see Jack Twist behind the wheel of the loud sports car that had come just a hair’s breath from bumping into his truck. Jack was the spoilt rich kid that most everybody loved most of the time, shook their head at the rest. Jack was smart and funny and one hell of an athlete, but he was also moody and high strung, seemed to be gettin’ worse every year. Ennis’d never had many classes with him, didn’t know much about him personally, but he’d overheard the teachers talkin’ about him a couple of times last year when they didn’t realize he was listening, worryin’ about Jack, like maybe he had problems at home or something. Ennis had never heard any of the other kids say anything like that, and usually they knew everything that was going on way before the adults did. Whatever... he and Jack had never been friends, probably wouldn’t get tight this year either. Jack wasn’t his problem - thank God. He had enough without addin’ Jack to the pile.
Ennis grabbed the old leather satchel that he carried his books in, jumped down from his truck and headed for class, just a few steps behind Jack. Jack was carrying a brand new backpack, whistlin’ some song Ennis had heard on his radio on the way into school, boppin’ his head to the beat. He was wearing jeans, a dark blue t-shirt and running shoes. Everything looked brand new. Ennis looked down at his clothes - same old jeans he’d been wearing forever, plain black t-shirt that was soft from washin’ but a little faded, and his cowboy boots. He had some gym clothes in his truck for later. His mom had bought him some new clothes, but he felt kinda self-conscious wearing them, like he was gettin’ all dressed up to impress people or something, which was totally not true. He was who he was, a farm boy, and they could take him or leave him - he didn’t care either way. He knew Jack Twist would leave him, and that was fine. He’d made it through three years of school without bein’ Jack’s friend, he could handle one more. And then he’d be free of this small town ‘berg with all it’s fucked up shit, and his old man with his iron fist wrapped tight around the reins a his life - Ennis couldn’t fuckin’ wait to be free.
- Location:Hot Springs, AR
- Mood:
mischievous - Music:Country Comes To Town, Toby Keith


Comments
You've got me hooked, and this just wasn't anywhere near enough. More, please! Heavens, I just pictured myself going through more months of continual refreshing of this LJ page. ;)
So looking forward to this.
Anyway, I am on board for your next ride. Yippee!
Looking forward to much much more!
With just a few words you've brought Jack and Ennis to life. So we're getting more? Soon?
Boring? your fics is never connected with this word!
Now i have a fic to look forward to already!
Although... you might want to give folks some warnings if there's kinks/weird stuff in the chapters, readers seem to be more protective about Jack and Ennis, more than RPS.
Can't wait!
Eve
I love your take on things and I can't wait to see Jack and Ennis explore the "fringe edges" of sexuality. Yea!
I am so sorry to see Boys of Blue Ridge end. I still owe you a comment on the last chapter. I read it last night around 2:30 in the morning and was not thinking clearly at that point.
[quote]this is just your typical, boring romance novel.[quote]
From you? boring? typical? never sweetie, never ever. See below quote...
[quote] In this story, I'm going to explore some things that many might consider strange, kinky, taboo, icky weird, whatever. If I can think of it, they are going to talk about it or do it.[quote]
That's my girl!!! Full on romance with lots of pervy action and talk!! I am going to be at your heels begging for more constantly!!! Bring it on!
I know firsthand that teenagers can be a handful, they are often rude, devious, sullen, and super horny!! I know you won't disappoint us... your characters are phenomenal, they are so close to real I sometimes forget it's fiction!!!
YAY!!! I am over the moon happy with your new fic!!! Can't wait for prologue and Ch 1!!!
love you W. and the kitties. and the boys.
L/K
love you!!!
Thank you for writing it!
L/K
I'm loking forward to the next chapter !
Back to comment soon :-).
Christina
Loved the detail you wrote about them...I could easily picture Jack and Ennis in my mind.
Can't wait for more!
xoxo
Christina
You SO know I am coming on this ride with you....can't wait to see how you take on Jack & Ennis!! I am so excited about this!!
*Hugs*
Holly
well done!
Yeah! A new story!
Can't wait for more!!!
Arlad
I'm looking forward to this fic..... nothing wrong with romance and happy endings, especially where J & E are concerned. ( And I'm SO relieved at your reassurance that no animals will be injured in the writing of your story.... LOL!) Your writing has a snap, crackle and pop that I really like. Can't wait for more.
Hurry up with the next part :).
Jeanine
I know your Jack and Ennis just from these 6 paragraphs.
And I know just how hooked I'm gonna be.
They think they don't need each other NOW.
Well, we all know that these two don't know themselves THAT well until they get to really KNOW each other. ^^
Delighted to see the new story.
Cheers!
Love your style, your funny introduces to every chapter and your ideas. And no worries about your updates, your one of those who post very regularly (oooops, right spelling?, English isn't my first language and I'm sure it's a much longer time since I was in high school learning English), but well the sooner you update, the better.
maria
Mostly it is because the original story is so beatiful and heartbreaking that it's hard you know, am I explaining myself?
Still I should have known you would create a world of your own that is what you did here and I have to say, I like it!
And you can tell this two are going to work out because though for two that "seem" to not care about the other at all, they sure know a lot about the other already.
I know I will love it, I know.
HA!
Just the intro made me laugh.
This is really good.
Ennis seems to be a really together HS kid.
Can't wait to find out where are you taking us.